2Jared's+Tale+of+Utopia

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Mini Saga. Exactly 50 words Once in the state of Indiana, there lived many animals in a zoo. The animals wanted to be free so they left. They ended up in Rio. The animals split up because they we're fighting. The good animals got away and ended up in Africa while the others got ditched. Here's another one... I might write this one later on... Once in the world of Yut, there was a very special pony that always would be so nice. She frolicked along every day. One day, her world was invaded by different monsters including vampires. She got bitten by a vampire and became evil. Will she get helped by Earth’s astronauts?
 * Describe the start of your story. || * Introduce your characters:
 * What do they want?
 * Where are they going? || In the beginning of my story there are some animals in a zoo. The animals always felt being free meant being happy. What the animals want is too be free. The animals have no idea what the outside world was like because they were born in the zoo. They end up going to a certain country. ||
 * What happens in the middle of your story? || * How will all your story and characters develop?
 * Plot Twists and Turns?
 * How will you lead up to the climax? || The animals end up lost after making a contraption sending them to that country. The Lion then blames it on the bears for them having the idea. The characters then split up in sections. The 1st section is the weak but smart animals. The second is the strong and smart section which thinks that they are the leaders but keep fighting, and the 3rd section is the just strong section. The 1st and 3rd section then teams up to get out of that country and leaving the 2nd section there. While they are at that country they meet some other animals to help them along the way and come with them back to the zoo. ||
 * Outline the climax...How does the story end? || * Is your ending what your readers are expecting?
 * Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story? || The 2nd section ends up splitting up because they keep fighting over who's stronger or smarter. They end up going to the zoo there. The 1st and 3rd section come up with an idea of making a slingshot that will send them all the way back to that zoo. Because the smarts knew that they wouldn't make it that far and that they would get hurt, they added an engine to a plane like figure that all the animals were in and left. They only made it halfway to the zoo and end up in Africa. They like it there because all the animals were nice there. But there was one animal who felt like they were boss so the zoo animals say "Here we go again!" ||