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the lunch box.


Describe the start of your story.
  • Introduce your characters:the twinkie, who is smart and evil, a mad scientist. ;the candy cane sweet and lovable and sugaryness;
    the apple, a worker, on the bottom; the water bottle, the highest like a zues over people except he is over food; bell pepper, a great rebellion leader, strong and awsome; hot cocoa, the king because he is a drink; baby carrots, the sheep in reference to animal farm. follows anyone.

  • What do they want? the healthy food wants freedom from the hot cocoa; hot cocoa wants to replace the water bottle; candy cane wants twinkie to notice her; twinkie wants to not be known as mean

  • Where are they going? they are going to freedom and character development.
What happens in the middle of your story
  • How will all your story and characters develop? the hot cocoa gets more evil; candy cane doesn't see the bad in others;twinkie will turn out to not be evil and healthy food will do something.

  • Plot Twists and Turns?many many many

  • How will you lead up to the climax? by hot cocoas actions and seeing through characters point of view
Outline the climax...How does the story end?
  • Is your ending what your readers are expecting? they all get eaten cause they are food and it is lunch time

  • Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story?kinda

mini saga

candy cane screamed. Twinkie yelled shut up. water bottle knew what was going to happen next but he would not get involved and try to stop it. hot cocoa giggled maniacally in his laboratory.bell pepper stopped for tever reason.candy cane sobbed into a handkerchief.The end is near.

The Lunch Box

by Sarah Nelson

Water bottles crying for the end is near
Water bottles crying for the end is near

apples. lots of apple's relatives
apples. lots of apple's relatives

bottle to leave.Candy cane heard this then screamed. It was so horrible. The thought made her want to melt.But instead she ran to twinkies laboratory and started to blubber. Twinkie pulled out a machine he had made for the times candy cane comes and blubbers.The machine instantly said what candy cane was trying to say. "It's so horrible, hot cocoa told me that I was going to be his wife but I don't want to he's so mean and evil..." at this point twinkie shut off the machine. "Now candy cane," he said, " you just need to run away"."But, said candy cane,I thought I could just marry someone ELSE and I would be fine". "Nope," said twinkie, "you need to run away so bye I never saw you".So taking twinkies advice she ran away and came to the healthy food. "ALRIGHT you healthy food we are gonna over throw the king and capture and make sufffer that evil maniacal baby carrots, what is our objective?!" The baby carrots repeated her instructions.Candy cane smiled grimly."Now starts the rebellion!!!!!"she screamed.Apple and Bell pepper were shocked. This is not candy cane.Apparently that evil maniacal twinkie did something to her. So they decided that they would go along with candy canes plan and make twinkie suffer.Water bottle sighed but there was no one to hear him.It would all end and soon.Candy cane led her attack.As they marched upon the place were hot cocoa resided the baby carrots stared the battle chant."Healthy Food good, junk food bad." Obviously they did not practice the habits of mind.When they got to the junk food they captured twinkie and hot cocoa. They also smushed and kicked twinkie. Suddenly something came from the heavens and took bell pepper. "The great cavern." he screamed. Eventually everyone was taken. As water bottle was going he said "I told you so" and then disappeared.