Zoo Tales

MIDDLE _ BEGINNING _ END Work Sheet

Describe the start of your story.
  • Introduce your characters: Penguins Lions Giraffs hippos monkeys
  • What do they want? Freedom from zoo
  • Where are they going? To take over the zoo and live in freedom
What happens in the middle of your story?
  • How will all your story and characters develop? Penguins convince other animals to rebel
  • agianst the humans in the zoo and become rulers.
  • Plot Twists and Turns? Penquins take over zoo become much like humans.
  • How will you lead up to the climax? Having penquins run zoo like humans and control all other animals.
Outline the climax...How does the story end?
  • Is your ending what your readers are expecting?No the penquins make a mistake and the humans take back
  • over the zoo.
  • Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story?Yes i will forshaddow how the penquins take over power
  • and control the animals.
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O my gosh, did u here about that story in the book Utopian stories from the fourth dimension? Its called Zoo Tales. It is amazing. It was rated by news week 5 flippers up. Also it was on the new york times best seller list for 5 months. It is flat out great. Animals are taking over the zoo and you won"t want to miss it. That is why you should purchase the book utopian stories from the 4th dimension!!! Wrote and published by Katherine's boogers.




Mini Saga
The monkeys were scrambling, trying to escape the vicious dogs. The Lion had two security guards against the wall. The hippo had taken control over the servalance room. But where were the penguins? They were no where to be found during the rebelion. The animals ran all the humans away.

Rough Draft
Zoo Tales
Here in Chicago Illinois, the zoo is pretty plain. There are Penguins, Lions, Giraffs, Hippos, Monkeys and much more animals. The animals had an early morning meeting every Wednesday morning. Today, the meeting was rather interesting. The Penguins usually run the meetings, and one of the elder penguins Old Josh had a new idea. He said, that the zoo animals needed to make a rebelion.Your resolution must never falter. No argument must lead you astray. Never listen when they tell you that Man and the animals have a common interest....we must not come to resemble him...No animal must ever live in a house or sleep in a bed, or wear clothes, or drink alcohol, or smoke tobacco, or touch money, or engage in trade." Was what he told the animals to have the will to rebel against the humans. So for the next week the penguins had never been seen. They were hiding in the area planning how they were going to take over the zoo. After the penguins were happy with what they had planed, they revealed it at the next Wednesday meeting. The animals all agreed with the penguins because they were the only animals at the zoo that could read and right. The next day the penguins told the animals that the rebelion was going to happen tonight. So that night the lions job was to take care of security guards the monkeys were to distract the guard dogs so that the hippos the second smartest animal at the zoo could take over the servalance room. But during the whole rebelion the penguins were hiding just waiting for the other animals to take over. The penguins already had a plan to take over the zoo and all the other animals. The penguins sat back and let all the other animals fight and not put themselves in danger. Finally around midnight all the humans had been runoff. The zoo had a large celebration about what they had done and how they had overcome the humans. The penguins had gotten the idea of a rebelion when they had herd that a farm somewhere out in the west had taken over the humans controling them. The penguins had been talking to the birds and having them get more info from the birds that live on or close to the farm. The penguins had told all the animals that they were going to set up a utopia. None of the animals new what that was so the penguins had to explain that everyone would do equal amounts of work and share equal amounts of food. Soon enough the penguins had set up a list with all the animals and what chores they had to do. The animals were all ok with these chores. But the penguins themselves had no chores to do. One of the hippos questioned why the penguins had no chores. But the penguin sqeaky, a great public speaker had told the hippos that the penguins had no chores because it was there chore to run the zoo and keep track of all the animals. The animals at the zoo hardly ever questioned the rule of the penguins. Especially not Zumba the lion. His motto was the penguins are always right. He also was the strongest animal at the zoo and was the hardest worker at the zoo. He was respected by many of the animals. Ecept the penguins. They thought of him as there working servant. He did all of the dirty work for the penguins. He did more chores than anyone at the zoo and also was fed the least out of all the animals at the zoo. Finally the penguins had got word that the humans were planning an attack on the zoo. The penguins had designed a plan to fight off the humans. When the humans did attack the animals were prepared. The front line was t
he hippos and that distracted the majority of th
e humans. But a few of the sneakier humans
had gotten around the hippos and moved forward. But they were cought off quard by the ambush that was started by the Lions. That was the last of the humans. The animals had one the first fight agianst the humans but the penguins knew that, that wouldn't be the end of the humans. The animals continued on living at the zoo under the control of penguins. But this time the penguins weren't informed about the second human attack. This time they brought tranqualizers and tazers. The animals were cought off guard and lost this fight. All the animals were put back into there confined cells. Then the zoo was opened agian and things were back to normal.
Final Draft


Zoo Tales
ByConner Nelson

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Here in Chicago Illinois, the zoo is pretty plain. There are Penguins, Lions, Giraffes, Hippos, Monkeys and much more animals. The animals had an early morning meeting every Wednesday morning. Today, the meeting was rather interesting. The Penguins usually run the meetings, and one of the elder penguins Old Josh had a new idea. He said, that the zoo animals needed to make a rebellion. Your resolution must never falter. No argument must lead you astray. Never listen when they tell you that Man and the animals have a common interest....we must not come to resemble him...No animal must ever live in a house or sleep in a bed, or wear clothes, or drink alcohol, or smoke tobacco, or touch money, or engage in trade." Was what he told the animals to have the will to rebel against the humans. So for the next week the penguins had never been seen. They were hiding in the area planning how they were going to take over the zoo. After the penguins were happy with what they had planned, they revealed it at the next Wednesday meeting. The animals all agreed with the penguins because they were the only animals at the zoo that could read and right. The next day the penguins told the animals that the rebellion was going to happen tonight. So that night the lions job was to take care of security guards the monkeys were to distract the guard dogs so that the hippos the second smartest animal at the zoo could take over the surveillance room. But during the whole rebellion the penguins were hiding just waiting for the other animals to take over. The penguins already had a plan to take over the zoo and all the other animals. The penguins sat back and let all the other animals fight and not put themselves in danger. Finally around midnight all the humans had been runoff. The zoo had a large celebration about what they had done and how they had overcome the humans. The penguins had gotten the idea of a rebellion when they had heard that a farm somewhere out in the west had taken over the humans controlling them. The penguins had been talking to the birds and having them get more info from the birds that live on or close to the farm. The penguins had told all the animals that they were going to set up a utopia. None of the animals knew what that was so the penguins had to explain that everyone would do equal amounts of work and share equal amounts of food. Soon enough the penguins had set up a list with all the animals and what chores they had to do. The animals were all ok with these chores. But the penguins themselves had no chores to do. One of the hippos questioned why the penguins had no chores. But the penguin squeaky, a great public speaker had told the hippos that the penguins had no chores because it was there chore to run the zoo and keep track of all the animals. The animals at the zoo hardly ever questioned the rule of the penguins. Especially not Zumba the lion. His motto was the penguins are always right. He also was the strongest animal at the zoo and was the hardest worker at the zoo. He was respected by many of the animals. Except the penguins. They thought of him as there working servant. He did all of the dirty work for the penguins. He did more chores than anyone at the zoo and also was fed the least out of all the animals at the zoo. Finally the penguins had got word that the humans were planning an attack on the zoo. The penguins had designed a plan to fight off the humans. When the humans did attack the animals were prepared. The front line was the hippos and that distracted the majority of the humans. But a few of the sneakier humans had gotten around the hippos and moved forward. But they were caught off quard by the ambush that was started by the Lions. That was the last of the humans. The animals had one the first fight against the humans but the penguins knew that, that wouldn't be the end of the humans. The animals continued on living at the zoo under the control of penguins. But this time the penguins weren't informed about the second human attack. This time they brought tranquilizers and takers. The animals were caught off guard and lost this fight. All the animals were put back into their confined cells. Then the zoo was opened again and things were back to normal. The End