Star gets a surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Describe the start of your story.
A cat named star lives in hollywood in a beautiful green
house with a awesome owner that spoils her!
  • Introduce your characters:Star,Buddy,Bill,Lucy
  • What do they want?a dog to make star happy
  • Where are they going? doggy pound external image funny-pictures-cat-hides-dog-under-a-pillow.jpg
What happens in the middle of your story?Lucy and Bill
go to the puppy pound and they get a puppy and name the
puppy Buddy. Star does not like this and she does some
not nice things and Buddy is still very nice to her!
  • How will all your story and characters develop?Star loves being alone buddy to have a friend
  • Plot Twists and Turns?Star is always spoiled but when buddy comes along will star have to share her amount of spoilage?
  • How will you lead up to the climax? star is taking a nap then her owners leave and come back after star wakes up with a new family member!!!!!!
Outline the climax...How does the story end?Buddy saves
Star and she said before that she will never be comfortable
with buddy but when he saves her she makes buddy her brother
  • Is your ending what your readers are expecting?No, well i do not know because she is mean then treats him like a brother
  • Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story?I guess so. Kinda , maybe !!!!!!!! external image cat-and-dog.jpg
He was staring.Staring at me.his eyes were staring into my soul.I could feel it.I tried to look away but I just could not help myself.Then he starts walking toward me. Step by step without taking his eyes off me.He then stops.stares. then disappears.

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In Hollywood, California there was a fluffy cat named Star. Star lived in a big, beautiful green house with 2 lovely owners that spoiled her!!!! The owner’s names were Bill and Lucy; they were pretty awesome and middle-aged owners`. Star is a big, fluffy cat, and she loves being the only pet because she gets everything she wants!! Star had just finished having a wonderful lunch so she was heading towards her bed to take her after lunch nap. As she was heading to herd bed she passed her owners and to her it looked as if they were leaving. Star stopped for a minute, shrugged, then just kept on heading to her bed. Star then did a little stretch and layer down for her nap. Right before star fell asleep she thought, “I have the best owners ever and there is no way this could go wrong!!!” Star then layed down her head and fell asleep. A couple hours later, Star was awoken by the sound of barking, Star wasn’t too happy about that. So Star stretched, and then got up to go find out what had woken her. Star started to walk around the house following the sound of the barking, she walked into the kitchen “nope”, she walked into the dining room”nope”, she walked into the living room”yep”. Star walked into the living room and stopped straight in her tracks, there in front of her was a puppy lying on HER owner’s laps. She walked up to HER owners and started to purr and meow, but “what was this” she thought, to her it seemed as though her owners were ignoring her. “So you want to play that way now do you?” thought Star. So Star jumped up on to the couch and got right next to the puppies ear and then she MEOWED as loud as she could and the puppy was startled and he jumped so high in the air he got a little scared and then Star was so pleased with what she did that she thought she deserved a petting from her owners so Star crawled across her owners laps and started to purr but then she was picked up and put in her bed because apparently that is not how you treat a new family member. Wait what did Lucy just say to her, that backstabbing, stupid puppy was her brother???? “WHAT IS GOING ON IN OUR MODERN SOCEITY”, thought Star! But then Star got an idea to send that puppy back where he came from. Star started walking away then she heard something that made her stop in her tracks, Star just overheard Bill calling the puppy Buddy, so that was his name Buddy, Bill and Lucy named him Buddy because he liked friends. Star was named Star because she acted like well a Star. So, after a few minutes Star came back to life and kept walking. Star was up late that same night planning schemes to get that puppy back where he came from. The scheme Star was going to try tomorrow is that she is going to tie buddy’s favorite toy to the mailman so buddy chases him down and jumps on him, then Bill and Lucy will think that Buddy is a bad dog and will take him back to where he came from. So in the morning before anybody else in the house was up Star snuck outside and went down to the end of the driveway then she stopped and looked left but could not find the mailman so she looked right and about 2 miles away was the mailman so Star snuck up to the mailman and tied buddy’s favorite toy to the mailman’s bag. Then she runs back home and sneaks back inside and goes to her owner’s room and jumps on to her owner’s bed and starts purring and meowing to get them to wake up. After star did all that for a couple minutes her owner’s finally woke up and went downstairs with Buddy and Star right on their heels. A couple minutes later Buddy heard his favorite toy jingling and he ran outside and chased the mailman down and jumped on him. Star was laughing because everything was going as planned but what Star did not see was that the mailman was enjoying it because after all Buddy was only a puppy, a cute one as a matter of fact. Then Bill and Lucy went running after Buddy and the mailman, but when they got there the mailman wasn’t mad he was actually playing with Buddy, then Bill and Lucy were only mad for a moment. Star hated this so she ran into the middle of the road and meowed as loud as she could but only Buddy heard her and when Buddy looked at Star but he could notice was the huge garbage truck heading straight in Star’s path. Buddy then ran toward Star barking at her to move but she would not listen so when Buddy got to Star he threw her on his back and ran as fast as he could to the sidewalk and he set her down right as the garbage truck went zooming by. Star was so happy she decided maybe having Buddy as her brother wasn’t going to be so bad after all. So from then on out Star and buddy were brother and sister !!!!! THE END