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The Crayons

By, Kuhnee Kuka
the bucket they find to live in
the bucket they find to live in

The characters
The characters

"Aaaah" yelled Emily as she was being picked up by a four year old boy. "I get tired of being used to color with". "don't squirm we are crayons not people, the child will figure out we are living crayons" yelled Whitney. The boy colored a purple person with Emily's head and dropped her on the table. "OOOOOOOWWWW" screamed Emily. The boy got up and ran around the corner and into the bathroom to go potty. Whitney jumped down from the box to help Emily get up. They looked around for Noah and Natalie. Finally they had noticed them lying on the ground in pain from dropping 2 feet. Whitney and Emily climbed off the table and slid down the chair. when they asked Natalie what happened she replied "when the boy got up he knocked us down and ran over to the bathroom. Whitney and Emily helped them up and they all climbed back up to the crayon box. They never liked living in a crayon box crowded with 20 other crayons. They wanted a new box and a new area to put the box in. The crayons had a meeting with everyone and decided to find a new home. they looked around and found a big box, they all climbed down and ran over to it. but right when they were about to check if anyone was near, the dog scruffy came running by. They hurried and climbed into the box and shut the flaps. The dog walked right by them. They jumped out and tried to pick it up, it turned out to be very very light. They picked it up and then set it right back down again. "where in the world are we going to put it" Questioned Noah. Orange replied "i heard the big boy telling his honey that he was going to fix the hole in the wall by the bathroom door". They picked up the box and carried it over outside the bathroom door. There was a hole and they shoved the bucket into it, it was a perfect fit. They were finally free and could enjoy life or so they thought. Eventually there became 2 classes and everyone who wasn't in the first class was a worker, a hunter, and a scavenger. They didn't know they were doing all the work for the first class's benefit. they always were chanting "1 leg good 2 legs bad.

Mini saga

>) The crayons were trying to get the new giant box for their home. They finally got it but it was super heavy. So they used the brown pet hamster as help and barely got it in the crack. Then they lived in two classes. They were caught by the mom. 50 Words.


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  • Introduce your characters:

  • What do they want?

What happens in the middle of your story?
  • How will all your story and characters develop?

  • Plot Twists and Turns?

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1. The start of my story is about three crayons trapped in a box with others wanting to be free.

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>)Blue Crayon- Noah
Purple Crayon- Emily

>)They want to find a giant box to make a civilization out of.

>)To crayon and marker land(where all markers go when they get lost or run away.
2. They get pulled out and left on the table after a boy gets done coloring. then they run trying to find a large container. they finally find one but before they could move it into a hole in the wall -that led to a clear open path to drag the container to then they could be come a civilization-the mom picked them all up. right before she put them away the little boy yelled for her, she dropped them on the table and ran to her son. He really only wanted some cookies and milk. The mom went into the kitchen and got him the box of cookies and a glass of milk.
>)Successful but hard to continue living.

>)they think that the box will be light but its really really heavy,

>)The dad gets out drywall mud and almost fixes the hole but then realizes that there were too many electrical wires.
3.They end up getting their new box and there becomes first and second classes and they don't like the people cause they were always trapped in a box.