The Bull Dozer

By: Matthew Bourgeau

A rainforest getting destroyed

My favorite gorilla
My favorite gorilla

As Gary the monkey was trying to get a bannana he heard a obnoxious sound so he went to see what it was. He was shocked he had no idea what it was. So he went back to his villiage to tell them they didn’t listen. He didn’t know what to do. So he went to the thing to see what it was. As he went to see it was getting farther and farther every minute. When he went to tell his friends they said he was crazy. So he went to the bull dozer and stood in front of it. It didn’t stop so he ran back to his village. That’s when he saw it was a large figure very tall and hairy. He just stood there and watched it. It didn’t know Gary was their so he kept watching. When he saw enough of this strange creature he ran back tohis village where the rest were resting. He grabbed the animals and said come here other wise you might not live very much longer. As they were coming they saw what he was wanting them to see. As they went back to the village they decided they needed to take shifts watching these weird creatures. Then their were more machines cutting down his friends trees. He didn't know what to do so he ran and got all the animals and they saw other humans standing their with afros and striped shirts with bright colors in front of the bulldozer with signs yelling at that machines. They went to see what they were doing and they had signs that said, " Stop Bull Dozing" and other stuff that meant for them to stop. One said, " You will work harder". They stood out their for days on end and finally they stopped, but I think it was because they had enough of the stuff they were looking for.

After of couple weeks of just wondering if the humans were ever gonna be back. The next couple of days more animals moved closer to their village so as they were just wondering why the the other animals were coming close to them. So Gary asked, " Why are you animals moving closer to us?" One of the animals said it was because Gary and the other animals could protect them from the humans. So the village of animals had a lot of discussing to do so they had a meeting. The animals agreed that the humans should not be here so they needed to find the kind humans. So they went to the rainforest to look for them. When they finally found them they were camping in a couple of tents. They agreed to work with them if they worked harder the animals agreed to work with their conditions. They followed the animals to the site where the humans were. When they saw them they had a lot more machines and people then last time they met. When they went in front of the machine it almost hit the animals/humans. Luckily they got out of the way just in time. After that they decided that this will be a lot harder than they expected so they went to get the rest of the animals and as they were going back they realized their was no more animals their they thought the humans took them because where they were their was a forest and now their isn't after a couple of weeks the forest was all gone. The animals got captured and took to a weird place where other animals were and did not live happily ever after

The End


Describe the start of your story.
  • Introduce your characters: Gorilla(Fluffy) Parrot(Squeaker)
Humans( George) the rest of the humans and animals Monkey( Gary)
What do they want?The animals want to make the humans stop bulldozing their land

  • Where are they going? Rainforest
What happens in the middle of your story?
  • How will all your story and characters develop? They will come together to stop they humans

  • Plot Twists and Turns? The animals find out what the humans are doing it for and the animals split up on different sides

  • How will you lead up to the climax? The animals fight the other humans and hippies help the animals?
Outline the climax...How does the story end?
  • Is your ending what your readers are expecting? Yes

  • Have you used foreshadowing throughout your story?
My mini saga:

Once upon a time their was a cat who knew about a place where everything was ruled by humans but he planned to change that the only problem with that though. The dogs were protecting their owners. The cats had plans for the dogs. Who will win dogs or cats?